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There you go Lavitz, thats the kind of drum beat you want to get going, I could really feel the power and force in that. On that note, you just need to get some supporting, high energy bass going and this song is golden.

Very nice work. Im also very impressed in the quick turn around. Incredible man.

Keep up the good work,
-fosterchild

September 30, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks a lot Foster, and I agree, the bass needs a bit more work ^^

And this song and the last one made me learn one thing: TUTORIALS HELP A LOT! lol XD, this is the reason behind the quick turnaround :P

keep up the good work too Foster,
-Lavitz

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Score: 8

"not bad man"

submission: In The Alley

date: September 29, 2009

you have a pretty good song here, but its missing out on a lot of classic drum n bass elements. It sounds like your drums are taking a very generic back seat to the rest of your sounds. You can get away with that in other genres but in drum n bass you gotta make drums your focal point (wow so much wisdom in that sentence.... im sure you knew that but its too much to delete now so ill just go on...) Also your song sounds a bit too distorted. I mean it sounds pretty cool but i feel like you lose a bit here and there from not focusing more on the beat.

overall though its pretty nice, keep working on your stuff man i see potential

-fosterCHILD

September 29, 2009

Author's Response:

yea like I edited in the comments, it sounds a lot more like techno then dnb. BUT! I've checked tutorials for fl studio and actually found out how to properly do drum n bass beats with FL now. I tried doing it with different drum sounds, but it
ultimately turned out to be an epic fail XD lol.

I've started to make another dnb sound, but this one will be much more, MUCH more related to the genre. I don't say it's gonna be the best song I've made so far, but we'll see ;)

thanks, wise-guy ;)
-Lavitz